Friday, 26 August 2016

COMMENTING AND COUNTER COMMENTING


The more I browse through various sites including face book and blogs,  the more I feel elated to find members commenting on one topic or the other, particularly those one which are tagged (e.g face book). Tagging should not be done without seeking prior approval of the tagged. This sometimes creates unpleasantness too as number of community/group members do abhor tags. However the participation has always been very encouraging. It is really heartening to note that comments have become multi-dimensional. Comments are sober, knowledgeable, witty and humorous, naughty and teasing, complaining and reassuring depending upon the topics/statuses presented before the friends/ members.
 Sites/groups which cater for literary activities are fast coming of age as a virtual magazine worth its salt with each and every topic under the sun being showcased through poetry & prose. The big difference between a hard magazine and virtual magazine lies in its acceptance. If one feels like commenting on any subject/story/poetry of the hard magazine or sends his/her work to get published, it can be rejected by some obscure sub-editor of the magazine as per his/her whims & fancies and convictions rather than going through the merits of the work/comment. The comments/works are sieved before it is printed and if a work/ comment is on the political subject, clearance depends upon the political leanings of the owner of the magazines/papers. This is not the case with these virtual magazines. Except the vulgar & indecent comments or the comments/posts which hurt the sentiments of anyone, the moderator or an originator of the status/posts allows it to be seen and read. The biggest advantage in this case is that even a layman like me can post the topics/ comments and watch community friends/ members to react, advise, laugh and share their experiences under the disguise of commenting and counter commenting. Ultimately I stand to gain from the vast wealth of knowledge & experiences which the other hon’ble members impart/ share.  These comments are to be chewed, gulped, gloated over, laughed at or simply ignored. No one pressurises anyone to read their statuses though friends do have large expectations to be read by their friends which may not be justified sometimes due to paucity of time at one’s disposal and number of like minded groups to be catered for.

Counter commenting provides a great scope of interaction between the members leading to their social interaction sometimes in person within their vicinity. Some members who surf through the sites may read a subject of their interest only and yet may or may not comment on it.  Others may go through the topics randomly and offer their comments to the best of their capabilities and knowledge. A few may confine to their groups and discuss/dissect everything which is vended to them by the vendor. The end result is shedding all inhibitions and coming out to reclaim your wit, humour, love for writing & expressing your own self which ordinarily might not have been possible while sitting in the comforting four walls of one’s own  habitat. Sometimes even if a controversy crops up due to member’s comments, discussion cum interaction becomes more interesting which when converted into arguments and clashes of ego are automatically sorted out by the creator or moderator.
 All sort of complexes are shun when it comes to posting and commenting and in this respect the female gender has also made its presence felt time and again. It is to the credit of empowerment of women that our women friends don’t lag behind when it comes to join their counterparts creating a niche of their own while posting their topics and commenting even on male dominated subjects.  The females in the virtual world have become a force in themselves to reckon with.
In the end it has always been my pleasure to go through various subjects of my interest written by both professionals and non-professionals on these sites including face book. God bless this virtual world which has kept us entertained, shared, busy and lively.
--------------------------------------------------------by Tribhawan Kaul


Thursday, 25 August 2016

वर्ण पिरामिड 33-34

जन्माष्टमी के उपलक्ष्य में 
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वर्ण पिरामिड 33-34
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हे 
कृष्ण 
गोपिका 
...गोवर्धन 
जग हिताय
गोपकुमाराय 
स्व चरण पूजाय।
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माँ 
मुख 
ब्रह्माण्ड 
जगदीश 
आवागमन 
विराट स्वरुप 
गिरधारी आशीष।
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सर्वाधिकार सुरक्षित /त्रिभवन कौल

Wednesday, 24 August 2016

कश्मीरी युवाओं के नाम-एक पैगाम (Kashmiri Yuvaon ke naam-ek paigam)



” My sole hope and prayer is that Kashmir should become the beacon light to the benighted subcontinent”–Mahatma Gandhi




कश्मीरी युवाओं के नाम-एक पैगाम
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उस माँ से आज़ादी मांग रहे,
जिस माँ ने तुमको जन्म दिया
उस माँ से आज़ादी चाह रहे,
जिस माँ का तुमने दूध पिया
आज़ादी का शब्द नाद
अरे आज़ादी का सूचक है
पकिस्तान में मांग के देखो,
बर्बादी का द्योतक है //

पत्थर हाथ में लेकर तुम,
साबित करना क्या चाहते हो
संविधान हमारा साक्षी है,
अहिंसा से सब पा जाते हो
आका तुम्हारे तुमको ,
शतरंज की बिसात बनाते हैं
जैसा चाहें तुमको वह,
वैसा ही तुम्हे चलाते हैं //

पूछो उनसे उनके बच्चे,
क्या वह संग तुम्हारे रहते हैं
दूर देश में पढ़ते लिखते,
उनके अपने बच्चे प्यारे हैं
समझदार युवा तुम सब हो ,
कुछ तो इसपर गौर करो
मुजाहिरों पर जुल्म हो रहे,
इस पर भी तुम ध्यान धरो //

पंडितों को तो बाहर किया ,
अब क्या तुम्हारी बारी है ?
कश्मीरियों को ख़त्म करो,
पाकी करतूत जारी है
है कश्मीरियत का वास्ता,
चाल पाक की समझो तुम
अलगाववाद के हामी लीडर,
हैं " पासे उनके " समझो तुम //

भारत के तिरंगे नीचे,
तुम अपनी उड़ान भरो
हर क्षेत्र में बन दक्ष,
कश्मीर की पहचान बनो
कश्मीर का दर्द लिए
मैं पंडित, विस्थापन में जीता हूँ
पाक की बातों में ना आना,
तुम्हारी बेवतनी से डरता हूँ//

जय हिन्द के नारों से
दुश्मन के मंसूबे ख़ाक करो
भारत माँ के सपूत तुम,
इरादे उनके राख करो
जय हिन्द, जय भारत जय हिंदुस्तान
हो तुम्हरी यही.आन बान और शान //
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सर्वाधिकार सुरक्षित/ त्रिभवन कौल
image courtesy:- Google.com 

Note : The poem stands published on 26 August 2016 in JK Monitor News http://www.jkmonitor.org/index.php/articles

Monday, 22 August 2016

कविता

कविता
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जो मन में है
वह लिखती  हूँ
जो लिखती हूँ 
वह बोलती हूँ
जो बोलती  हूँ
वह सत्य है
जो सत्य है
वह निर्विवाद है
जो निर्विवाद है
वह ईश्वर है
जो ईश्वर है
वह अनश्वर है
जो अनश्वर है
वह मैं हूँ  मैं हूँ  मैं हूँ  
मैं कविता हूँ,  
जी हाँ, मैं कविता हूँ। 
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सर्वाधिकार सुरक्षित /त्रिभवन कौल

दोहे


तुम मिले तबै सब मिला, तुम गये सबै जाय

समझ तुम ईश गये , मिले नहीं कछु जाय।।
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ईश ईश कह थक गया , बहे नयन अश्रुधार

सांई फिर भी ना मिले , मिले छोड़ा संसार।। 
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पूजा समझा तुम मिले , ना सेवा ना प्यार

कैसा मनुज  जन्म लियो, धन जीवन आधार।।
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सर्वाधिकार सुरक्षित /त्रिभवन कौल

Saturday, 20 August 2016

Felicitation/अभिनन्दन

Friday/19-08-2016 I was felicitated by the Senior Citizens of Sadafull Haasy Club, Thane (Maharashtra). It was a pleasant surprise which I shall cherish for long. Thank you so much Shri Narottam Panchal Ji (President) and Shri Prakash Kulkarni Ji (Secretary) and all the members of the club.
शुक्रवार  /19-08-2016 ठाणे (महाराष्ट्र) स्तिथ सदाफुल्ल हास्य क्लब से वरिष्ठ नागरिकों की ओर से मेरा सादर अभिनन्दन किया गया। इन पलों को मैं हमेशा संजोये रखूँगा। आदरणीय नरोत्तम पांचाल जी (अध्यक्ष ) औरश्री प्रकाश कुलकर्णी (सचिव) समेत सभी सदस्यों का हार्दिक आभार।
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Three marvellous females ! But.....





All of a sudden people have started talking of female foeticide and 

gender baise once three marvellous girls of Bharat/Hindustan 

Deepa, Sakshi and Sindhu brought a smile on our  faces winning 

hearts of millions. Winning medals has absolutely nothing to do 

with gender. It is all about training, grit, determination and will 

power to excel. We should talk about sports persons who have 

brought laurels to their country. Any female, of whatever age and 

whether she is a sports person or not, has to be treated with dignity 

and honour. Two issues should not be mixed up. Jai Hind. Jai 

Bharat.

=======================================================posted on Facebook on 20-08-2016