Tuesday 1 March 2016

द्विपदी -11 (Couplet-11)

द्विपदी
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होती थी न गुज़र, हमारे दीदार के बिना
पहुंचे जो हम, वे नज़रें चुराने लग गए.
(Hoti thi na guzar, hamare deedar ke bina
Paunche jo hum nazaren churane lag gaye)

Ever waiting eagerly for my appearance
when confronted, she tried to glance away
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सर्वाधिकार सुरक्षित/ त्रिभवन कौल

4 comments:

  1. DrGurvinder Banga
    क्या बात सर
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    नीलोफ़र नेहा
    Very nice! Respected Tribhawan Kaul ji
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    रंजना नौटियाल
    वाह क्या बात ।
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    Mukesh Srivastava
    kya bat hai
    -----------------------via fb/purple pen 01 Mar 16

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  2. Sakina Minhaj Shikari
    Wah
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    Driftwood Ashore
    Waah Waah sirjee
    ---------------------------via fb/Poets, artists unplugged

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  3. 02March 2016
    Jai Krishna
    वाह !
    ============================PSOI
    Aparna Pathak
    Kya baat kya baat!!
    ================================kaffia

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  4. अकेला इलाहाबादी
    March 2 at 4:35pm
    वाह बहुत खूब
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    Hari Lakhera
    March 2 at 7:09pm
    Der se aaoge to yahi hoga.
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    Pramila Pandey
    March 2 at 9:34pm
    क्या कहने
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    Jatinder Singh Bhogal
    March 2 at 9:56pm
    Bahut Khoob
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    Mukesh Kumar
    March 2 at 10:04pm
    Nic
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    Vijay Tanna
    March 2 at 10:14pm
    Bht khoob Sir
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    वसुधा कनुप्रिया
    March 3 at 8:27am
    Waah waah!
    -------------all via fb/Timeline post

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